Talk:Japanese M15 home video distribution announced

From my perspective, there appears to be two sentence fragments present in the article:

The Blu-ray Disc version to be available on sale for ¥ 5,229 (Yen). While the price for its DVD version has been set at ¥ 4,179 (Yen).

Shouldn't the sentence read similarly to the following edit?:

The Blu-ray Disc version is to be available on sale for ¥ 5,229 (Yen), while the price for its DVD version has been set at ¥ 4,179 (Yen).

It would be appreciated if other editors/users could submit input on this issue. Thanks in advance. Fenyx4 (talk) 16:40, 18 October 2012 (UTC)

Thank you for the suggestion, it does sound better and it has now been changed. Also, the users are allowed to submit input on such issues by using the talk page or the respective thread on the forums. Again, thanks for pointing it out. Adyniz — Wanna talk? 18:27, 18 October 2012 (UTC)