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Noticed a typo in one of the paragraphs:
Noticed a typo in one of the paragraphs:


The first two of these trailers are anime-style introductions to the world and characters of the new game. Notably, the voice of the {{p|Pikachu}} in these trailers is not played by {{bp|Ikue Otani}}, but rather by {{wp|Rie Kugimiya|Kugimiya Rie}}, a Japanese voice actress synonymous with Tsundere characters. This Pikachu also has an interesting cosmetic difference, in having a notch on '''it's''' tail similar to the top of a heart shape.
''The first two of these trailers are anime-style introductions to the world and characters of the new game. Notably, the voice of the {{p|Pikachu}} in these trailers is not played by {{bp|Ikue Otani}}, but rather by {{wp|Rie Kugimiya|Kugimiya Rie}}, a Japanese voice actress synonymous with Tsundere characters. This Pikachu also has an interesting cosmetic difference, in having a notch on '''it's''' tail similar to the top of a heart shape.''


'''It's''' should be '''its''' (sans apostrophe).
'''It's''' should be '''its''' (sans apostrophe).


Also, I had two suggestions for the article:
Also, I had two suggestions for the article:
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2. This is a bit minor, but I was puzzled on why Rie Kugimiya is ordered as "Kugimiya Rie" (which I'm guessing is 'last name, first name' Japanese order) while the traditional 'first name, last name' order is exhibited by {{bp|Ikue Otani}}'s name when it is presented in the article. I was wondering whether both voice actresses' names should be in the same order for consistency within the article...?
2. This is a bit minor, but I was puzzled on why Rie Kugimiya is ordered as "Kugimiya Rie" (which I'm guessing is 'last name, first name' Japanese order) while the traditional 'first name, last name' order is exhibited by {{bp|Ikue Otani}}'s name when it is presented in the article. I was wondering whether both voice actresses' names should be in the same order for consistency within the article...?


Thanks in advance for taking these issues into consideration.
Thanks in advance for taking these issues into consideration. [[User:Fenyx4|Fenyx4]] ([[User talk:Fenyx4|talk]]) 14:25, 2 November 2012 (UTC)

Revision as of 14:25, 2 November 2012

Typo and Suggestions

Noticed a typo in one of the paragraphs:

The first two of these trailers are anime-style introductions to the world and characters of the new game. Notably, the voice of the Pikachu in these trailers is not played by Ikue Otani, but rather by Kugimiya Rie, a Japanese voice actress synonymous with Tsundere characters. This Pikachu also has an interesting cosmetic difference, in having a notch on it's tail similar to the top of a heart shape.

It's should be its (sans apostrophe).


Also, I had two suggestions for the article: 1. Pikachu's cosmetic difference in the trailer looks like the [female variant] of Pikachu; I'm not sure whether it would be reasonable to link "cosmetic difference" to the [List of Pokémon with gender differences] page within the article...?

2. This is a bit minor, but I was puzzled on why Rie Kugimiya is ordered as "Kugimiya Rie" (which I'm guessing is 'last name, first name' Japanese order) while the traditional 'first name, last name' order is exhibited by Ikue Otani's name when it is presented in the article. I was wondering whether both voice actresses' names should be in the same order for consistency within the article...?

Thanks in advance for taking these issues into consideration. Fenyx4 (talk) 14:25, 2 November 2012 (UTC)