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== Character's ==
== Character's ==


At the end of the second paragraph, there shou8ldn't be an apostrophe in ''character's''.
At the end of the second paragraph, there shouldn't be an apostrophe in ''character's''.
edit:oops sorry forgot to sign--[[User:WenGobou|WenGobou]] 10:10, 2 May 2011 (UTC)
 
== Lets play Mummies and Daddies ==
 
In the pic with Pikachu, Buneary and Happiny, ''Lets'' should be spellt ''Let's''.
 
edit: sorry forgot to sign--[[User:WenGobou|WenGobou]] 10:10, 2 May 2011 (UTC)
 
== Acute accent ==
 
The acute accent in missing on ''Pokémon'' in the last paragraph.
 
--[[User:WenGobou|WenGobou]] 10:15, 2 May 2011 (UTC)
 
== Missing word ==
 
"when told do anything he would resist, not because he didn’t want to or it would have caused him any discomfit"
 
Corrected, it would be
 
"when told to do anything he would resist, not because he didn't want to or it would have caused him any discomfort"[[User:05308|05308]] 07:16, 3 May 2011 (UTC)

Latest revision as of 01:19, 12 May 2011

Defiantly?

In the first paragraph, is that supposed to be "defiantly", or did you mean the word "definitely" instead?--RiverAura 05:02, 2 May 2011 (UTC)

Fixed. Thank you. --P S Yライダー 05:20, 2 May 2011 (UTC)

Character's

At the end of the second paragraph, there shouldn't be an apostrophe in character's. edit:oops sorry forgot to sign--WenGobou 10:10, 2 May 2011 (UTC)

Lets play Mummies and Daddies

In the pic with Pikachu, Buneary and Happiny, Lets should be spellt Let's.

edit: sorry forgot to sign--WenGobou 10:10, 2 May 2011 (UTC)

Acute accent

The acute accent in missing on Pokémon in the last paragraph.

--WenGobou 10:15, 2 May 2011 (UTC)

Missing word

"when told do anything he would resist, not because he didn’t want to or it would have caused him any discomfit"

Corrected, it would be

"when told to do anything he would resist, not because he didn't want to or it would have caused him any discomfort"05308 07:16, 3 May 2011 (UTC)