Talk:Plethora of new BW5 cards revealed

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Wording choices

  1. Can we use 'multitude' next time? I like that word; I think it's pretty. 'Abundance' is also quite nice. We could also explicitly state a number.
  2. Is it really worth changing the blurb to remove the word 'and'? It spams so many things.
  3. If the word 'revealed' is in the title, then don't put it in the tagline. Avoid repetition, especially in these key areas.

darklordtrom 11:08, 3 March 2012 (UTC)