Talk:Pokémon X and Y to be available with Nintendo 3DS family, games registration in North America: Difference between revisions

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(Says Nintendo 3DS family 'games' , and eligible games instead of Nintendo 3DS family handhelds, and eligible games.)
 
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From March 1 until March 31, players may register the Nintendo 3DS family '''games''', and eligible games
==Announcement error==
''From March 1 until March 31, players may register the Nintendo 3DS family '''games''', and eligible games''


That should say Nintendo 3DS Family Consoles or Handhelds or Handheld Consoles.
That should say Nintendo 3DS Family Consoles or Handhelds or Handheld Consoles. {{unsigned|Yamitora1}}
 
==Grammar==
''From March 1-31, players in North America may register a Nintendo 3DS family system and any eligible game to obtain a free download code for {{bp|Pokémon X and Y|Pokémon X or Pokémon Y}}. The systems that may be registered are the {{bp|Nintendo 3DS}}, {{bp|Nintendo 3DS XL}}, and the {{bp|Nintendo 2DS}}.''
 
The article is fraught with errors and should be edited. This is my proofreading of the first paragraph of the article. --<font face="Segoe UI"><span style="text-shadow:grey 0.1em 0.1em 0.1em">[[User:IWannaBeTheVeryBest|<font color="red">The</font>]]Very[[User talk:IWannaBeTheVeryBest|<font color="white">Best</font>]]</span></font> 06:58, 26 February 2014 (UTC)

Revision as of 06:58, 26 February 2014

Announcement error

From March 1 until March 31, players may register the Nintendo 3DS family games, and eligible games

That should say Nintendo 3DS Family Consoles or Handhelds or Handheld Consoles. - unsigned comment from Yamitora1 (talkcontribs)

Grammar

From March 1-31, players in North America may register a Nintendo 3DS family system and any eligible game to obtain a free download code for Pokémon X or Pokémon Y. The systems that may be registered are the Nintendo 3DS, Nintendo 3DS XL, and the Nintendo 2DS.

The article is fraught with errors and should be edited. This is my proofreading of the first paragraph of the article. --TheVeryBest 06:58, 26 February 2014 (UTC)