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The sentence "My first game was Blue, which I still have (and it still works!)" doesn't end in a period. It should be like this: "My first game was Blue, which I still have (and it still works!). I am a rare sight on Bulbanews, but that's because I'm not much of a writer. However, I do h..." | The sentence "My first game was Blue, which I still have (and it still works!)" doesn't end in a period. It should be like this: "My first game was Blue, which I still have (and it still works!). I am a rare sight on Bulbanews, but that's because I'm not much of a writer. However, I do h..." [[User:Pandakekok|Pandakekok]] ([[User talk:Pandakekok|talk]]) 04:59, 2 August 2019 (UTC) | ||
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Just a little word choice thing I noticed
In the last section, you write, "The lack of changes will be applauded by those who prefer a purely original experience, while lauded by others who were hoping for a new, fresh take on an old game." I do not think "lauded" was quite the term you were going for there; "lauded" means praised or acclaimed, while I think you were going for something more along the lines of disparaged or criticized. Again, it's pretty minor, but I just thought you might want to edit that word to better reflect what you meant. --RiverAura (talk) 04:07, 9 March 2015 (UTC)
missing period
The sentence "My first game was Blue, which I still have (and it still works!)" doesn't end in a period. It should be like this: "My first game was Blue, which I still have (and it still works!). I am a rare sight on Bulbanews, but that's because I'm not much of a writer. However, I do h..." Pandakekok (talk) 04:59, 2 August 2019 (UTC)
