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::::Thank you very much for your help. :) --[[User:Super goku|Super goku]] ([[User talk:Super goku|talk]]) 16:55, 27 December 2013 (UTC) | ::::Thank you very much for your help. :) --[[User:Super goku|Super goku]] ([[User talk:Super goku|talk]]) 16:55, 27 December 2013 (UTC) | ||
== Sentence error == | |||
You made a grammatical error in [[Japan Cup 2014 to be held from May 2-5|this]] article. The error is: | |||
<br>"...with Mewtwo, Yveltal, Xerneas, Zygarde, and Pokémon that were Poké Transported from the Pokémon Black and White and Pokémon Black 2 and White 2 games are ineligible and cannot be used in the tournament." | |||
<br>Read it aloud and you'll see what's wrong. I think this phrase was a standalone sentence at first, but then you joined it to the previous sentence with "with". When you did that, however, you failed to change the sentence to keep it grammatically correct. If I had permission, I'd fix it myself. But I don't. [[User:Neal Cruco|Neal Cruco]] ([[User talk:Neal Cruco|talk]]) 21:04, 16 March 2014 (UTC) |
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Whao there
I noticed you uploaded the CoroCoro cover, and I just wanted to let you know that some of the staff are already working on an article for the CoroCoro cover. So if you're working on one, hold off on it, and edit the one we're about to post if you must before it's published. Just to avoid two articles being posted at once. Jo The Marten 07:04, 10 June 2012 (UTC)
My Article
Um so My Article still says its a draft so does that mean it will be posted on the mainpage or not? - unsigned comment from Glalie Power (talk • contribs)
Your recent edit on an article I submitted...
It may be uncertainty, but it's still a possibility. ~~LDEJRuff~~ 12:04, 19 April, 2013 (UTC)
Move page
Will you please move this article in the draft namespace to it in the page namespace? SaturnMario, his talk and his contributions 21:00, 1 July 2013 (UTC)
Move another page
I see my message on the talk page for it won't ever be noticed, as the article is already outdated. So could you please move First XY TCG products surface; BW11 name announced? Mistake: BW141, not BW11. オリジナル TheOriginalOne 21:08, 24 August 2013 (UTC)
- The article pertains to TCG, BW11 is referring to the next TCG English set number. It is correct in this case. ㄱ쉰 G50 23:55, 24 August 2013 (UTC)
News
Since you are quite active on Bulbanews, would you like create the Pokemon movie news based on this press release? [1] Thanks! Akurochan (talk) 06:57, 18 October 2013 (UTC)
Regarding article types
Thanks for fixing up my article. I typed the source in, but since I forgot to change the article type, it didn't go through.
Which leads to a question I have. Why isn't there a separate article type specifically for news taken from Pokémon.com ("The Official Pokémon Website")? "Other web site" makes it seem like it's being lumped in with a bunch of other sites, while it's one of the main sources for news, be it the Japanese pokemon.co.jp for new things coming out or the English pokemon.com for localization and dub news. Now, I know various other "important" Pokémon sites are in the same article type, but it does seem kind of out-of-place.
(Also, thanks for adding the Eevee TV part to the article. I was going to add that later, but things came up and I forgot about it.)
--KommanderAwesome (talk) 05:08, 3 December 2013 (UTC)
- No problem. Other Site right now is the only possible option for the regular link sources, not really sure why it's called that. Unfortunately Exclusive excludes the link, which is why the link and name disappears. It's due to it mainly being used for non-link sources that aren't Magazines or Bulbagarden-specific articles. You're doing a good job on your drafts, just a few minor adjustments and they'll be solid. :) ㄱ쉰 G50 05:31, 3 December 2013 (UTC)
Pokémon Bank article
Hey, G50. I wanted to know if you would be alright if I merge some of the contents of the draft I made with the official article. --Super goku (talk) 08:14, 27 December 2013 (UTC)
- Sure, it can't be edited by regular users so let me know on this Talk Page what you would like to add and I will add it in. Good job with the draft by the way, it was written well. ㄱ쉰 G50 08:25, 27 December 2013 (UTC)
- Thank you for the complement, I just tried the best that I could do. As for the suggestions, I have looked a bit closer and noticed that the majority of what I wrote has already been neatly summed up in the present article, so I will admit I only have a few. The first suggestion is a sentence about the initial release and subsequent postponement in Japan, Korea, and the remaining Asian countries as an added detail for the reader. The second is just three possible sources that could be added, especially the latter two. The final suggestion is just a comma after Poké Transporter in the first sentence. Thanks again, Super goku (talk) 09:36, 27 December 2013 (UTC)
- Added. ㄱ쉰 G50 09:47, 27 December 2013 (UTC)
- Thank you very much for your help. :) --Super goku (talk) 16:55, 27 December 2013 (UTC)
- Added. ㄱ쉰 G50 09:47, 27 December 2013 (UTC)
- Thank you for the complement, I just tried the best that I could do. As for the suggestions, I have looked a bit closer and noticed that the majority of what I wrote has already been neatly summed up in the present article, so I will admit I only have a few. The first suggestion is a sentence about the initial release and subsequent postponement in Japan, Korea, and the remaining Asian countries as an added detail for the reader. The second is just three possible sources that could be added, especially the latter two. The final suggestion is just a comma after Poké Transporter in the first sentence. Thanks again, Super goku (talk) 09:36, 27 December 2013 (UTC)
Sentence error
You made a grammatical error in this article. The error is:
"...with Mewtwo, Yveltal, Xerneas, Zygarde, and Pokémon that were Poké Transported from the Pokémon Black and White and Pokémon Black 2 and White 2 games are ineligible and cannot be used in the tournament."
Read it aloud and you'll see what's wrong. I think this phrase was a standalone sentence at first, but then you joined it to the previous sentence with "with". When you did that, however, you failed to change the sentence to keep it grammatically correct. If I had permission, I'd fix it myself. But I don't. Neal Cruco (talk) 21:04, 16 March 2014 (UTC)