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Can you get rid of the word "finally". It makes it sound opinionated. We didn't do it for other characters. Truthfully, ''Denzi to appear in DP165'' would be a better title. The news articles usually have the episode number and not the date. The date can always change. --[[User:Kenji-girl|Kenji-girl]] 11:57, 30 January 2010 (UTC) | Can you get rid of the word "finally". It makes it sound opinionated. We didn't do it for other characters. Truthfully, ''Denzi to appear in DP165'' would be a better title. The news articles usually have the episode number and not the date. The date can always change. --[[User:Kenji-girl|Kenji-girl]] 11:57, 30 January 2010 (UTC) | ||
Also, the title completely neglects to mention the appearance of Flint which I think is equally important. So I guess it should say ''Denzi and Ōba set to appear in DP165''. --[[User:Kenji-girl|Kenji-girl]] 12:01, 30 January 2010 (UTC) |
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